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gmamia said:

-beautiful.. Did you write that? Your heart speaks, Angel! Here we say, "Go with the Gut" ha!
Haiku- * 5, 7,5 syllables (sounds)* 3 lines* nature*opinion *surprise ending

posted over 2 years ago

gmamia said:

woops! "my bad" I messed up! It's not suppose to rhyme!

posted over 2 years ago

pkhawk said:

Hello Angel,I hope you are well.
I like this one, but remember, line #1 should have 5 syllables; line #2 should have 7 syllables, line #3 needs to have 5 syllables.
Example:
Eve-ry bo-dy shouts (5)And a truth can't see my heart (7)Heart says, why it's me (5)
I really do like it, but the number of syllables was just off slightly.

posted over 2 years ago

vishwapriya said:

Thanks teachers, for your help, I will improve my haiku writing. I have just tried to write. Thanks for correction. Take care.

posted over 2 years ago

aratrikaganguli said:

Even if it was wrong... so what...? it was still creative. i liked it

posted over 2 years ago

Mistythoughts said:

not exactly a haiko, but nice :)

posted over 2 years ago

aratrikaganguli said:

"HAIKU"

posted over 2 years ago

vishwapriya said:

Thanks buddies.

posted over 2 years ago

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